Sesshoukage Genkaitamesendo (Kenpachi Squishy)

[Squishy-Sama]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,450,true][atrb=height,500,true][atrb=style,background-color: #191919; -moz-border-radius: 20px; padding: 9px; border: 1px solid #d7d7d7; vertical-align: top; overflow: auto;] ► Squishy ► AGE: 999 ► GENDER: Male ► SEXUALITY: Heterosexual ► RACE: Shinigami ► DIVISION: 11th ► RANK: Captain ► PERSONALITY ► POSITIVE TRAITS Determined Cool under pressure Stong willed Loyal Smart ► NEGATIVE TRAITS Stubborn Rash Violent Lacks empathy Vengeful ► SKILLS Meelee Combat Expert Naturally fast Charismatic Poetry Fashion ► WEAKNESSES Kido, sucks at it and does not understand it Children, takes a lot for him to fight someone under 18 Trusting, believes everyone is as loyal and honorable as he is ► LIKES Children Fighting Running Women ► DISLIKES Moving slow Vegetables Squad 9 (as they look for disloyalty he finds this annoying) Cowards ► HOBBIES Training Talking to Women Eating ► PERSONAL ITEMS Candy (hates the stuff but gives it to children) Gum to chew and share rubber bands to ponytail his hair which comes to his lower back. ► HISTORY Squishy was born and died and was reborn quite some time ago, as his life from before does not really matter and he does not remember it we shall not discuss it. Also when he was reborn he appeared in the furthest district and like so many people there he did not remember his name, though before this he was a Hollow of considerate strength. He started his journey as a normal Hollow and begun devouring souls. However, he soon developed a hunger for other hollows becoming a cannibal of sorts. He soon ended up within the Gillan forest engaged in a feeding frenzy with other Hollow of his level and some of higher level. Throughout the feeding frenzy he lucky avoided getting any piece of him eaten. Because of this when he emerged and intertwined with other Hollow to become a Menos it was his mask that shown through showing he had the potential for advancement. He took him a considerable amount of time to get his personality and abilities to shine through; however as soon as he did he began his next step in evolution. As an Adjuchas-class Menos he took on a more humanoid shape. He also began to develop his own personal powers which mainly revolved around the summoning and use of swords. This is also when he first began to notice his incredible speed which would help him further consume fellow Hollows. As he gained more and more power he would eventually progress to the next and rarest of all levels of Hollow, the Vasto Lorde. As a Vasto Lorde he looked pretty much as he does now only his bottom half were wings made out of swords as was his right arm. He was feared throughout much of Hueco Mundo as a ruthless devourer of Hollows. Soon Hollows began to get boring and he wanted to find something else something more challenging. As another Vasto Lorde would be difficult if not impossible to find he decided to head into the spirit world to find himself a captain. It did not take long as his presence set off alarms throughout the seireitei. Before long he was standing before the captain of the 11th squad the first Kenpachi Hashirama Hanzo. After an incredible fight the captains Bankai proved too much for Squishy’s resurrection. In the end the Vasto Lorde was cut down and absolved of his sins of being a Hollow. After about seven months Squishy would reappear seemingly human again, with no recollection of anything about him. However, it would seem that his timing was far from good, as he was placed right in the middle of a crime scene as Academy goer was walking by. This caused the student to believe that Squishy was the culprit. Drawing his sword, this was still an Asauchi and attacked Squishy head on with his sword. Squishy whom had held on to his fighting instincts was easily able to dispatch and kill his attacker picking up his Asauchi as he did so, feeling completed with the sword on his hand he started his new life. His life was that of a criminal mainly due to people attacking him because they wanted his sword, and later because they wanted to prove that they too were strong. Although he still had not remembered his name the people around him began calling him Sesshoukage Genkaitamesendo, which to him seemed fitting. Death followed him around where he went as he was always being challenged and ended up killing his opponents because they were not at his level. His inability to empathize meant that he did not care as he felt it was their fault for attacking him. Sesshoukage was well liked in the district as everyone who he killed was hardened criminals, also he is extremely charismatic so that only helped his cause when he spoke. He was also well liked by children, whom he spent a lot of time with as he loved children. This was where he got his nickname Squishy from as they children could not say his full name and just begun to call him Squishy. The name sort of stuck and pretty soon everyone in the district was referring to him as Squishy. The Gotei 13 began to take notice after a while and started to send members of the 11th squad to bring Squishy in either to be recruited or to be executed. Squishy denied both options which usually lead to a fight, which also lead to his killing the Shinigami. It was then that he started having the dreams of the white haired Samurai in the plain clothes. The samurai would be in a bamboo grove laid out in the only clearing that was taped off with yellow keep out tape and littered with a bunch of swords sticking point down into the ground. The samurai always looked calm and composed and was talking to him although he could see his lips move he could not hear what the Samurai was saying, which only made the samurai smile and stop talking. They were weird dreams but Squishy decided that since he knew nothing about it would be best not to dwell on them. As he currently had bigger problems at the moment. The bigger problem being a reunion between him and Hashirama Hanzo, the first Kenpachi to whom he unknowingly already suffered a crippling defeat. Because he looked pretty much the same from when he was a Vasto Lorde the captain remembered his face and smiled. “It’s not often one gets to kill someone twice is it” Squishy did not understand his words and treated him like anyone else he would fight. That is to say he ignored him until he attacked, Squishy was the better fighter but the Kenpachi had experience as well as a secret weapon that would begin to jog Squishy’s memory as well as trigger his own evolution. At the start of the fight Squishy looked as if he would be the clear winner just as he had looked when they fought when he was a Vasto Lorde. Though, just as when he was a Vasto Lorde the secret weapon was burst out and began to overwhelm Squishy. “ Humiliate and destroy Hattori” the captain had released his shikai. This turned the tide of the fight and Squishy began losing, not just the fight but also his consciousness. Though when he was slipping under it was not just black he saw, but the weird bamboo grove that he sees in his sleep. “Ah I thought it might take a life or death situation for you to hear me”. He finally heard the Samurai speak and he finally understood what was going on and what that place was and more importantly who the Samurai was. “Let me introduce you to a friend of mine I just met Osore Mo Keibetsu Mo Mugen Ichiken”. With that he released his Shikai for the first time. The fight had become a huge one and pretty soon the entirety of the 11th had shown up either to see the man who killed so many of their comrades die or to watch what looked to be a very good fight. The two battled back and forth seemingly on even ground due to Squishy’s inexperience with his Shikai, and the Kenpachi’s inferior fighting ability. It seemed as if the fight would come down to a draw when the Kenpachi created space and smirked. “Bankai”. Once again Squishy was fighting for his life. Once again he was knocked into Mugen Ichiken’s realm. “Aren’t you going to panic?” His Zanpakto asked him “nah, it’s not in my nature. Aren’t you?” His sword spirit merely shrugged before they both began to laugh, though this seemed like a poor time for it this bonding moment unlocked the thing that would give Squishy the upper hand. Mugen Ichiken proceeded to tell him that the first Shikai was only a test to see if Squishy had what it took to wield him. The fact that he remained cool under pressure and could share a life even in the face of death proved that he was. Mugen then went on to explain that although the phrase was correct he prefers it in latin as it sounds better in his opinion. Understanding that saying the phrase in latin would awaken the swords true potential that is exactly what he did. “Noc Timeo Nec Sperno Mughen Ichiken” shocking everyone as his sword transformed again into a form that suited Squishy much better. Squishy was able to beat the captain into submission and eventually death due mostly to the surprise of the second release. Though the fight was won he was definitely worse for wear. As two more captains appeared he readied himself to fight knowing that he would not survive more than a few moments in a fight against even one of them unreleased. Though to his surprise they were not there to fight, it seemed that he had unwittingly cleared the circumstances for becoming the newest captain of the 11th squad as well as the second Kenpachi. Though this held no interest for Squishy as he turned them down the captains drew their swords informing him that as anything less than a candidate for captaincy his actions would be viewed as criminal and punishable by death. As he resolved himself to his fate and planned to go out fighting, the many witnesses including all the members of the 11th as well as most the members of his district pleaded with him to change his mind and to become captain. As he watched the children of his home district cry for him to live and become captain he had no choice but to become Kenpachi Squishy captain of the 11th squad. This was over 500 years ago and since then he has trained himself mastering both Shunpo and Shikai. He also trained for 200 years the art of Bankai, though he still has yet to master his Bankai his is almost perfectly controlled. There have been many up and coming Kenpachi that have challenged him for his spot all of whom died before he even had a chance to unveil his true Shikai. Although the other captains have tried to get him to learn Kido, he stated that learning how to fight it was enough. ► BATTLE SYSTEMS ► BATTLE STYLE Atributes:

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Physical strength: 60

Intelligence: 50

Mobility: 100

Reiyoku: 65

Offense: 100

Defense: 75

Squishy is a speed demon in battle. As he has spent most of his training improving his speed and agility as well as his endurance, these are the main points of his fighting. He tries to steer fights away from physical strength as his physical strength is not all that impressive (normal for someone his size). He also tends to stay away from Kido as any time he has tried to use it in the past it has backfired on him. Though he does not understand how to use them he is about average when it comes to defending against them. Also he believes the best defense is a good offense meaning he likes to overwhelm his enemy using his speed and agility to over run them before they have a chance to attack back.

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► ZANPAKUTŌ

► ZANPAKUTŌ NAME

Mugen Ichiken

► ZANPAKUTŌ SPIRIT

Mugen Ichiken Is a rather plain looking samurai with sandy blonde hair. He wears a white long sleeved shirt that says o samurai on the right breast and plain blue jeans and open toed sandals. He can always be seen with a toothpick in his mouth and a steely and determined glare in his green eyes as well as a brown jacket draped over his shoulder. When in his Bankai state he dons a white jacket that he drapes over his shoulders, his eyes become blue and his hair becomes golden blonde and his features take on a more fierce look. His inner world is a bamboo grove with only one clearing, the clearing is closed off with yellow keep out tape and within the clearing lies many rusted and damaged swords. he is always seen with a normal katana in his hand and when in Bankai the katana is colored black. It is noted that Mugen Ichiken loves the old Latin language. Mugen Ichiken is unflappable he cannot be shaken and does not react to most stimuli. He has complete control over his emotions and is almost never caught off guard or surprised, and if he is you won't be able to tell. Because of this he has a habit of telling his emotions instead of showing them. Sharing a laugh with him would literally be you laughing and him say "that's funny I am laughing" he speaks in a lazy and monotonous way that accent's his nature. Because he does not react emotionally he always seems as if he is bored.

► SEALED STATE

Just a regular katana with a black hilt and a black Sheathe that sits upon the left side of Squishy's hip. The katana has a square metal guard that is a bronze color. The sword is quite plain and looks like the many swords that normally reside in Mugen Ichiken's inner world minus the rust and cracks.

► SHIKAI

Squishy's Zanpakto Mugen Ichiken (Infinite one sword) is peculiar as it has two different Shikai. The phrasing for release is the same. Though, you will get a very different ability if said in Latin or Japanese. When said in Japanese the sword takes on a weaker state with a different ability. When said in Latin the sword takes its true shape and manifest its true power. The phrase for release is Neither Fear Nor Despise. Osore Mo Keibetsu Mo in Japanese which causes the sword to elongate to an incredible 7 feet. In this form it seems as if Mugen Ichiken has the ability to clone and manifest itself twice over (making a total of three swords). These swords can be manifested or banished at will though they cannot be controlled at will (need to be wielded to use). Also the swords will stay around until banished or the shikai breaks (even if just laying on the ground). Because of this nothing stops an opponent from grabbing on to a sword and using it (though Squishy can banish the sword at any time using his will). Noc Timeo Nec Sperno in Latin. In its true form the sword is of regular size and is all black. The true shikai is the ability to materialize the swords fully having them appear blade down within the battlefield, The swords that usually litter Mugen's realm are still there though instead of the usual rusty and chipped versions they are all copies of the true Shikai. He gains the ability to summon nearby swords up to 2ft to his empty hand.

• Manifestation of up to three swords
  
• Materializes swords from the realm
  
• Can summon any of the surrounding swords within a 2 foot radius to his empty hand (including swords of his in someone else's hand)
  

► BANKAI

Specus Graviscohors no Mugen Ichiken (Grotto Graveyard of Multiple blades) This unique sword is 33 and a half inches overall and features a 21 inch curved stainless steel blade with a deep red and black finish. This sword offers a distinctive double dragon bladed guard that is removable from the hilt and can be thrown like a shuriken. The main ability of the Bankai is an increase in his already stated powers, like bringing forth the entire realm making it tangible. He has the ability to shift the weapons he is holding to any bladed weapon. Also he gains greater control of the weapons that he is not holding being able to move them with his will alone.

• Weapon transformation
  
• Control over his swords with will
  
• Ability to summon a weapon to his empty hand from anywhere
  
• Arashiken (Sword Storm)-Using his ability to control his swords with will Squishy will brew up a maelstrom of swords around his opponent which last for quite some time (two to three posts)
  
• Incredible speed increase (50 points)
  
• Creates a different battle field that gives him a sort of home field advantage
  
• Kawarmiken (Body Swap Blade)-Using this ability allows him to effectively switch where he is standing with any weapon of his within his field of vision (making it seem as if he could teleport at will).
  
• One winged angel (Katayoku no tenshi)-Using his ability to control his swords at will Squishy will take half of the weapons (50 blades) and fashion them into a wing on his back. As it is just one wing it does not help me to fly, however, it does make an effective shield able to block incoming attacks by stretching out in front of him. The wing can also shoot its feathers out to attack with (this takes away from the amount of blades are actually within the wing).
  
• Tornado Blade (Gufuuken)-Using his ability to control his swords at will Squishy will form a tornado of blades that surrounds the opponent trapping them inside as well as cutting them repeatedly. This move can be dodged as the blades take some time to actually surround the opponent though once formed it can be moved to follow the opponent if they were not trapped inside. (last 2 post)
  Bladed Rain (Ameken)-Using his ability to control his swords at will Squishy will raise his weapons into the air and cause them to fall like around around the opponent. He can use this to overwhelm his opponent with a huge amount of falling weapons at once or time how many he has fall for strategic purposes.
  
• Blade Warrior (Samuraiken)-Squishy gathers 25 swords and form them into the shape of a man. Using the ability to manifest once Zan spirit into the real world Squishy has the swords take on the form of his Zan spirit given tangibility through the swords. This can be used to converse and train with the Zan spirit as well as for reinforcements in a battle. This can only be used once per battle and if Mugen takes enough damage his falls apart and becomes swords again. (Cannot use any of the Bankai abilities)
  

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[shadowyshinobi]

First age wise, 999 is a bit excessive. i like to think a shinigami ages 10-20x slower than an average human so age wise they should be about 10-20 times older than how they look because we know that shini age just slowly, so take into acct your pb then pick an appropriate age.

Next, how does a guy who lacks emathy come off as charming and charismatic? even a serial killer feigns empathy to get by but people can still see through that facade of faked emotion.

an easier way to list his first skill would be to say he is a masterful melee combatant.

Next, I'm not real keen on a person being purified by a shinigami captain's bankai only to maintain their memories or at least instincts and a hollow like nature. hollows are utterly purified upon being killed by a zanpakuto and a bankai would represent the unadulterated wish to absolve that soul of all the hollow taint. On top of that I'm not really big on believing that a shikai, especially an untrained brand new one can compete with a bankai. SO those things being said, i'd request that you change those portions of the history which i realize will require quite a bit of rewriting and molding but they really are implausible.

Next I know this isn't listed because i just mentioned it to akane last night, but stats cap at 100 nominally without the use of some other power and don't exceed 100 without something likes of a release technique so if you could rearrange that please. And really a kenpachi leading uad 11 with 25 str? that doesn't feel right does it?

Next a 7 foot long sword is rather unwieldy and extreme don't you think especially for a guy with regular or below avg strength? a 5 foot or so blade would still accomplish what you're looking for there as on average a sword from pommel to tip usually doesn't exceed 4 feet, 3 of which is usually blade, if that.

Then for the bankai, i'm not sure this has left a bankai flavor in my mouth after having read it...Like i feel as if it could do better or more or something. it's oddly conditional and essentially a raw rip from the char who is it's zan spirit from Soul Eater combined with a touch of tensa zangetsu so I really need to come to terms on whether or not I'm ok with that before I can think more on approving this

[Squishy-Sama]

Unohna is older than that (as her history states she was a founding member of the gotei 13 and that was about 1000 years ago).

Think Charles Manson just because you can't empathize with people and when you get mad you don't really see their point of view doesn't mean you can't be nice and outgoing.

true why didn't I think of that lol

Implausible but not impossible and he didn't have his memories just a remnant of fighting instincts, also it was not that my Shikai was better its that I took him by surprise and got lucky.

he is not physically strong that does not mean he can't fight he has average strength but his ability to fight comes from his speed, his ability to take a hit, and his tactics not just overwhelming physical strength. He is not the type to throw buildings or punch people across the room. Though I shall change the stats around to reflect the 100 limit.

Nodachi can be 7 feet long (the blade is only 5 feet of the seven) and it does not matter the size as it has been stated that Shinigami do not have issues using their Zan no matter the size as it is a part of their souls.

its not really a rip I use his little capture tech when I bring them into his world yes but other than that and the fact that there are so many swords its different. Though I get what you mean to me it seems like this would be better if it were a Shikai and then upgraded into something else as a Bankai. That is how I had it originally though other sites I have been to have complained that it was too strong for a Shikai. If you agree with me that this is more of a Shikai thing I will create the Bankai and we can go from there.

[shadowyshinobi]

hmm... as i stated in the cbox, i'll need to confer with vallen and akane about the other points to see if they're ok with them however :

Also fighting with the Kenpachi who killed him when he was a Hollow brought back many memories he did not know he had. The memories are tangled and fuzzy and he is currently getting help from Mugen Ichiken in attempting to reach them. So far all he knows is that he fought the first Kenpachi before and he was not so lucky the first time, though he does not know what that could mean.

you do say he has memories from before.


I'll let the 7 foot blade through if you give a more precise description of it then. Also your sealed zanpakuto could do with a reworking as well because we have no insight into the personality of the weapon visually from "a regular katana" what color is it's hilt, how is its guard shaped and colored and decorated? Does it have a sheathe and if so is it ornate? Scarred? Scratched and worn? Pristine?


Sure throw out ur bankai idea nad I'll gladly review and critique it. We've never been like other bleach sites and we pride ourselves on it. Hell I had a zanpakuto that litteraly overwrote reality at one point... though if u transfer that to shikai, perhaps simply make the ability to clone itself into a finite number of swords that do not disappear right away and then techniques in which you set up or throw out numerous ones at once or maybe the char likes to hurl them at opponents or something. 101 swords suddenly appearing might be a bit much but self cloning to a point seems ok.

[Squishy-Sama]

they are there he has no access to them though I was planning a plot where he would look for the memories ultimately leading him to a natural Hollowficaion (if something like that is allowed on the site though if not I will delete it)

will add the descriptions as I completely forgot to put them there lol

Its an area affecting Release kind of like Tosen where he and his opponent(s) get dragged into the Zan's world and exist in the same place but on a different plain (the world has the swords already there so I will be dropping the manifestation technique) and I will have to ability to summon the swords to my empty hand if you like I could change it from 101 to a lower number if you like.

give me some time to work out a Bankai as the one I had before I don't really like anymore

[Squishy-Sama]

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[shadowyshinobi]

I still can't in good conscience, let a shinigami through with hollow traits after purification by a zanpakuto. I'd prefer them edited out of the history and when the time comes for the introduction of vizards to the board, we can have squishy become one of them and over time develop an understanding as to how and why he was susceptible to becoming a hybrid.

Next the zanpakuto.

DO you feel the shikai and bankai are wholly sufficient to get what you want across?

so far the only part I'm not ok with is the imposing of your inner world on the outside world. creating a demiplane of existence is a rather potent ability. It might actually be easier for you to have a zanpakuto that has the ability to alter shape and function into other bladed weapons as a shikai, then in bankai have it advance to being able to duplicate itself a hundred times over as it is not simply one weapon, but many
then in bankai perhaps creating a burst or slew or stream of bladed weapons with a swing of the sword that don't dissipate then u (and your opponent) can keep picking them up and using them. the only problem with that however, is that it doesn't feel on the massive scale that most bankai take on.

Or maybe your fully released shikai splits into three swords and duplicates itself several times inside the triangular area set out by the staked blades. or what would be most appropriate would be simply splitting into two swords which could possibly be chained together or something and possess the power to shift shape or function somewhat within reason.

[Squishy-Sama]

I made him reappear during a crime so the student thought he committed it and I deleted the memories all together.

DO you feel the shikai and bankai are wholly sufficient to get what you want across? (I don't understand what you mean here)

Also I am going for a master of bladed weapons on a large scale kind of thing which is why I made it he and his opponent where they cannot be disturbed fighting in an arena with a shit load of bladed weapons.

I am confused because you say both that its not big enough and that its too big.

I can make my Shikai so that it materializes part of the realm but it is not in its own plain, then have the Bankai create the own plain.

Also the Bankai may seem weak when comparing to what we have seen in the show because he has not mastered his Bankai yet I intend to do so in character. The Bankai will be as overwhelming as any other Bankai when it is finished trust me the staff may need to nerf it down a little (as it is a habit of mine to push limits). But for now he mainly uses his mastered Shikai which is more than overwhelming when coupled with his knowledge of bladed weapons, his melee combat, and his speed.

Also the massive slew of weapons I have as the Blade storm.

There will be more moves to come but for now this is it for the Bankai as he still has not mastered it yet.

[shadowyshinobi]

Oh could you do the whole bankai write up now so we can see the zanpakuto in its entirety? Then we can have the abilities you can't use as of yet struckthrough. This way you can develop those techniques over time and we can properly approve all of the character and don't have to backtrack or approve things in the future or waiton you or anyone to write up something that should've been in the initial app.

Then in the future when you're ready to develop a new ability or use it we can let you know if we feel it's appropriate for that to occur and edit your app to reveal the new ability.

And my question was regardng the strength of your zanpakuto because I felt it to be underpowered by comparison to other examples we have floating around and canon abilities but if there's more to be seen here then I might change my mind on the matter.

Also I have to say I don't think creating an arena is appropriate for a shikai to be honest. there are bankai that do such a thing but I don't know of a single zan that in and of itself becomes an arena at Shikai level . Each is essentially a wepon with unique or interesting abilities and I think we should hold to that. If you want to keep other people out of your combats then do it socially. The char is a captain so he can just tell ppl to back the fuck off or beat them out of the area normally.

[TweaK]

My Tweak-sense is tingling.

I will back up shadow in that you should fill in all known and unknown abilities of you zanpakuto. As Shadow said already it just saves us all time and headaches and everything is ok'd ahead of time. If there is more to add please add it.

As for the arena effect, I have to side with Shadow on that as well, the only canon examples of zans that create any kind of caging effect for combatants are Ryujin Jakka and Hyorinmaru, both of which are elemental and that effect is just the result of their respective wielder's spiritual pressure physically manifesting in the area; not really a zan power. Personally I would ask that you drop that aspect altogether and use shikai to focus solely on the weapon itself.

In terms of the overall power of the zan and such Lets see how it all plays out. We won't ever know until he's rping.

[Squishy-Sama]

filled in the Bankai and have decided that I will be able to use all the powers as it makes no sense for me to have them there but inaccessible lol

Kaname has a Bankai that does almost the same thing (was inspired by it). Though, instead of cutting off all senses but touch I materialize the inner realm of the Zan (also proved do-able to a certain extent by a Shini materializing his Spirit when training for Bankai (though this is a stretch of that and I understand it is improbable I do not think its impossible for a Bankai ability.

[TweaK]

This all looks fine to me so Accepted